Wednesday, December 3, 2008


Along the stranded pavement i walk,
Holding nothing, leaving nothing,
I want no one behind me
But i want You in front
To lead me ,to steer me,
And to support me when
I tread upon a stone.

I wonder why the path is like this,
Easy for someone ,tricky for some:
Easy or tricky doesn't matter
As long as You are with me.

As i sense little drops of water falling
And sinking to my robes,
I perceive a thousand falling
Each rushing to meet the ground first.
Its that which amazes me,
The preciseness by which they drop
Whatever may be the hinderance,
I am happy as long as You give me that.

1 comment:

sreejith said...

Hey ammus....i really liked this work...some lines are having a good n nice spark.....keep writing....all the best...n some parts i think you can improve is this

"Easy or tricky doesn't matter
As long as You are with me."

All the best once again.....let me know wen u update it :-)